This poem had such great wording that I got lost in it. The words went together so well. It was what I call a perfect poem! Great job!
xoxo

P.S. Of course I was gonna take your advice. I think you're a better poet than me. So I took advice from someone better. It made the poem much better! Thanks!

You are so much more advanced as a writer than me, girl. I mean your poems never cease to amaze me. You gave such amazing images through the whole thing. And throughout it all it was consistant. Great job! :)!!!
~Midnight Sun