Something About This Boy

Awww! I love it! I can related 500% lol.
5/5
xoxo

Awwwe! I LOVED IT! Im glad your in love. lol Because I am too! WOW all though out the poem i was smiling and thinking about my bf. 5/5 DEFINATELY

Awwwww its so sweet!!! I love it! The feeling is wonderful isn't it? Sadly I'm not much of a "love poem" writer, I try but they just never come out quite like I want them, your poem however, marvelous!

Good job, i no the feeling it rocks doesnt it

First off, Thank you so much for all your comments and the add to your favs! It's so good to know someone enjoys my work!
Secondly, I liked this poem. It had a pretty good flow with the exception of your 4th stanza. The only real suggestion I have is in the first stanza. As far as rhyme and flow go, it's good, but I must admit the idea of falling in love with someone from the first time they smiled sounds...well a bit corny. I hate saying that, but love is so much more. Sorry, lol I've got a poem or two that describes love in ways that are a bit cheesy so I can't really say anything, because overall this poem was very good, and I love your work. You have so much talent, it was just that one stanza that through me. Thanks for listening, and feel free to disregard what I've said! lol
Charisma*