First off, Thank you so much for all your comments and the add to your favs! It's so good to know someone enjoys my work!
Secondly, I liked this poem. It had a pretty good flow with the exception of your 4th stanza. The only real suggestion I have is in the first stanza. As far as rhyme and flow go, it's good, but I must admit the idea of falling in love with someone from the first time they smiled sounds...well a bit corny. I hate saying that, but love is so much more. Sorry, lol I've got a poem or two that describes love in ways that are a bit cheesy so I can't really say anything, because overall this poem was very good, and I love your work. You have so much talent, it was just that one stanza that through me. Thanks for listening, and feel free to disregard what I've said! lol
Charisma*

Good job, i no the feeling it rocks doesnt it

Awwwww its so sweet!!! I love it! The feeling is wonderful isn't it? Sadly I'm not much of a "love poem" writer, I try but they just never come out quite like I want them, your poem however, marvelous!

Awwwe! I LOVED IT! Im glad your in love. lol Because I am too! WOW all though out the poem i was smiling and thinking about my bf. 5/5 DEFINATELY

Awww! I love it! I can related 500% lol.
5/5
xoxo