Awesome poem. Your a really good writer. Keep up the good work. :]

Your a great writer

Oh wow.. I wasn't expecting that. I wasn't expecting it to be so.. gripping.
I like how this person, whoever it is, is different within his/her self. Its cool how you made someone so contradicting. Good one

5/5. Wow I'm just speechless. This is an amazing poem! Just full of heartness and great expression!

I love the words u have used beautiful poem def a 5 vote x

Comment #4:

You look gorgeous,
When you cry,
Dazed with hate
And much to despise.

Amazing stanza...so beautiful! :) Not much to add to this one...it's just too good!
~Midnight Sun

Wow that is so good.. great rhyming and a smoothe flow.. i loved every single stanza in that poem, but my favourite 2 had 2 be "Bruised lips
And much to share,
River of veins
And broken prayer."

..and.. "You look gorgeous,
When you cry,
Dazed with hate
And much to despise. "
.. i like how you repeated this stanza at the end, repeating it made it such a strong ending. Well done 5/5, that poem was so gripping :)

Wow. amazing job. this was by far the best poem in the contest. you did such an amazing job. You look gorgeous,
When you cry,
that line is amazing. idk why but i love it. great job

Full of such confusion, but I like that for this poem. It's saying a lot in such short stanzas. I had one suggestion

Shattered dreams
And broken lies,
Dazed looks,
Badly covered eyes.

The last line in this stanza doesn't flow as well with the rest of the poem, but I do like the thoughts in this stanza the most. I think it was good and to the point. Nice job!
Charisma*

Oh wow....
This was so0o beautiful!
I liked the flow of this, I thought it was perfect, and I enjoyed the wording and imagery.

Omg...this is so true!!! i can feel the pain in it! i love ot 5/5

xoxo kisses