Blow me a rainbow

by Landi Cordier   Jan 1, 2007


All you had to do, was smile,
it would have helped me
through another million miles,

no roses asked,
not even tears
are welcome here,
just a plea from you,
to hold me near.

blow me a rainbow,
to keep me warm
when you aren't near

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short but very sweet. I like it. Yes about the contest, just send me an e-mail cause I want to enter! Thanks :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Plain, simple, to the the most amazing point: show me you love me. I need to know.

    good on ya..loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey there
    this poem could so mean so many things... it can relate to so many things to ppl...

    it gave me a warm feeling at end... #gd writting

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    I feel the emotion in this poem wasn't as strong as the others. Thats not saying it wasn't good. Maybe I just don't understand it..

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Aw. Well this one has the emotion. You are a good poet, hope to read more sometime. I will watch for new poems. Good job!

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