I want you to need me

My favorite poem so far by you but again i have a recomendation

"needing your breath
upon my cheek,
wanting your lips
on my tender skin,
blowing a kiss,
a soft warm breeze."

in that stanza you should take out either
"blowing a kiss, a warm soft breeze"
or
"wanting you lips on my tender skin"

or add two more lines and make it into two differnt stanzas of 4

eihter way it would be perfection for you poem

The bath part made me chuckle. Your poem is every girl's deepest craving and fantasy. I'm sure you'll be given plenty of compliments on it

I know how you feel here. Everything will come, no worries. Good luck and good job.

Everybody wants to be needed no matter what, but especially by the ones we need. nice job 5/5

Mhmm beautifulllll poem. sweet. the longing for someone to wrap you up in their arms. thats a nice feeling.