I think its sweet, a lovely poem:)
good work 5/5

Great poem 5/5 keep it up.

Wow you can really feel the passion coming through this poem. Excellent!

Besides a few capitalizations that it needed, it is beautifully written, keep it up, love it!!!!

So sweet..amazing poem..your very talented.

Mhmm beautifulllll poem. sweet. the longing for someone to wrap you up in their arms. thats a nice feeling.

Everybody wants to be needed no matter what, but especially by the ones we need. nice job 5/5

I know how you feel here. Everything will come, no worries. Good luck and good job.

The bath part made me chuckle. Your poem is every girl's deepest craving and fantasy. I'm sure you'll be given plenty of compliments on it

My favorite poem so far by you but again i have a recomendation

"needing your breath
upon my cheek,
wanting your lips
on my tender skin,
blowing a kiss,
a soft warm breeze."

in that stanza you should take out either
"blowing a kiss, a warm soft breeze"
or
"wanting you lips on my tender skin"

or add two more lines and make it into two differnt stanzas of 4

eihter way it would be perfection for you poem