by Landi Cordier Jan 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I want to write a love poem, |
by Rachel RTVW
Sweet and heartfelt. I like the repetition of the first and last stanza. Nice job. |
A really great poem .. i love the first and last stanza.. but i dont like how the stanzas in the middle have 5 lines rather than 4 , it disrupts the flow of the poem, which besides the two stanzas with 5 lines is very nice |
by RJ
I like this one... Great job! |
by Taylor
You've summed up the difficulty alot of people face when trying to describe that feeling.. not just love, but something more.. a divine essence, as you say. |
There is never a word to describe love, maybe just that though. Love can describe love. But the ones who can understand it best, are the ones in love. Good work. |