That is so sweet!! I love this poem!! Very well done! 5/5! |
by *Isolde*
Wow this poem is even better than the other one I read. 5/5. Keep it up. |
by Cindy
This was really good. The emotions can be felt in the words you write. Great Job! |
by kathleen
Wicked!!! both thumbs up.. keep it up! |
by Bryan
Now this is a very good poem, love it, great flow, great job narc, another 5/5!!! |
by Michelle18
This is so so so sweet!!!!!! i like it. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Nice poem. keep up the work. |
This is a great poem - sometimes there are no words that can describe the way we feel. excellent job 5/5 |
There is never a word to describe love, maybe just that though. Love can describe love. But the ones who can understand it best, are the ones in love. Good work. |
by Taylor
You've summed up the difficulty alot of people face when trying to describe that feeling.. not just love, but something more.. a divine essence, as you say. |
by RJ
I like this one... Great job! |
A really great poem .. i love the first and last stanza.. but i dont like how the stanzas in the middle have 5 lines rather than 4 , it disrupts the flow of the poem, which besides the two stanzas with 5 lines is very nice |
by Rachel RTVW
Sweet and heartfelt. I like the repetition of the first and last stanza. Nice job. |