Luanne, What a beautiful poem! I am incredibly impressed. It was a lovely story and I think you encaptured perfectly how Father Christmas/Santa Clause lives on. It is in the story and making people who are less fortunate happy. I thought you wrote this beautifully well done, I got all teary and emotional at the beginning then it had a happy ending, which was lovely, great write Luanne, Good work!

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I'm mad that I am super late reading this...whats wrong with me and where have I been...my apologies!

I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!!.....it reminded me of me actually...not Jamie but Santa..every year my church does this thing called the Noel project and we put on shows and give toys and food to the less fortunate..its always a blast and more rewarding for me just to see the little boys and girls smile when I give them toys.....Sometimes the world seems hopeless but there are people who cared like this Santa guy in your poem...excellent write!!!
Chelsey

I think a lot of people could do with reading this Lu.
It really shows the kind spirit that so many people have and what amount of happiness they can bring.
What a humbling poem
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*

Luanne,
This was one of the most touching poems I have ever read. One act of kindness can touch someone so deeply. Excellent Job! Take Care Cindy

What a wonderful poem, written by someone who must have a beautiful heart.