A wish for pain

by DeadGirl AKA Becka   Jan 1, 2007


A near death experiance,
happened to me...
but how can I still be living?
how can this be!?
I took the blade,
of what should have ended my life...
I slit my wrists,
many times that night...
blood was gushing from my wounds...
the blissful sounds...
of deathening tunes...
I felt as if,
I could not care...
death was bringing me...
into the devils lair...
sitting in a puddle of blood...
I drifted off slowly...
as I thought I would...
I saw a bright light...
which led me back home...
how could this happen!!?
my fate had been written in stone!!
I wanted to feel,
the pain again,
to make it all,
become real!
but I'm still here...
I'm still alive...
I guess I'll have to try,
one last time...

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow....i like the poem! And hey, don't kill yourself!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I agree with Dave but anyway you wrote this piece greatly. It is interesting and emotions are excellently described. I like the atmosphere, you also expressed pain superbly.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by grim

    Wait I meant it had pain in it's title. Should've have been able to edit.

  • 17 years ago

    by grim

    Great poem. I went straight for this since it had death in it's title. keep the dark ones going.

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Wow i hope u dont kill yourself becuz your talented i would like u to read my poem She gave up its under depression or the one NuMbEr Of CuTs

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