Wow i hope u dont kill yourself becuz your talented i would like u to read my poem She gave up its under depression or the one NuMbEr Of CuTs

Great poem. I went straight for this since it had death in it's title. keep the dark ones going.

Wait I meant it had pain in it's title. Should've have been able to edit.

I agree with Dave but anyway you wrote this piece greatly. It is interesting and emotions are excellently described. I like the atmosphere, you also expressed pain superbly.
Well done! 5/5

Wow....i like the poem! And hey, don't kill yourself!!!!!!