You\'re In Love With Your Best Friend

by TaNyabAbEE   Jan 1, 2007


I see the way
at her you look.
i know for sure,
your heart she took.
how can i compete,
when she has your heart?
i know this is hopeless,
where do i start?
she\'s everything i\'m not,
you have so much the same.
we have little in common,
do you even remember my name?
you are both in rodeos,
and are great at what you do.
i don\'t want to admit it,
but she\'s the girl for you.
before i even came,
you fell in love with her.
you don\'t look twice at me,
your best firend is you world.
i\'m just a stranger,
who came in between.
i wish i could say,
this is just a dream.
your best friend is your love,
but i\'m in love with you.
i need some help from someone,
because i don\'t know what to do.

true story. the guy i\'m in love with is in love with my best friend, and his best friend. please comment, or give advice, cuz i need some!! thanks!!:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This is a good poem, and I certainly feel that it has been a victim of injustice. By no means do I think this poem should have such a low rating. I apologise of other people's lack of understanding. I too know what it's like when you write a good poem and it dosen't get well recieved. I think my favorite part was the opening rhyme. It flowed so well and was simple. Sorry I haven't got any advice, but at least you got to express your feelings in a creative way...and globally too.

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'My Sleeping Beauty'.

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