This is a good poem, and I certainly feel that it has been a victim of injustice. By no means do I think this poem should have such a low rating. I apologise of other people's lack of understanding. I too know what it's like when you write a good poem and it dosen't get well recieved. I think my favorite part was the opening rhyme. It flowed so well and was simple. Sorry I haven't got any advice, but at least you got to express your feelings in a creative way...and globally too.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'My Sleeping Beauty'.