Another great poem by a great poem of the site, you have done a really great job. keep it up so i can always come back to read your great talent.5/5

Awww. This is great. I really like it. I think you should keep rhyming, you have great talent.

I know exactly how that feels, i know how memories hurt, this is a 5/5!! keep it up!!!

I like it! I wish i cloud write like you do... excellent!

Hmm. it's good. but some of the words can be changed, to make the poem sound better. good job though.

You make rhyming look so easy. I meant to tell you that you did a great job rhyming on your last one aswell. Your flow was amazing, and everything else too. You did an amazing job!

Excellent

5/5

Loved like always but kinda sad :(

Mmm, a very nice poem and one that i can really feel, i can relate to this very well, having split with my ex and him moving on without a care, forgetting what we shared. well done
flowed well, a good piece

I thought this was really sweet yet sad.
I loved the flow and rythm, and the first stanza had me hooked. I think you did a wonderful job on this.