Wow that is soo beautiful. I love it. I give you a 5 for just being really excellent!

Wow this is so powerful. . . especially that last line. . .
Laura
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Oooh I like this one a lot.
I agree with those two.
^^^.
Or \/\/\/, lol I dunno where this comment will appear.
I like the first bit.
=D.
You should be in set 1 for english too.
But our English teacher is very annoying.
Ly
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Very fantasy like

but very real at the same time

great effect
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This was great. I like the last line the best. 5/5
-vino