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by Taylor   Jan 2, 2007


I can't think.
This mask muffles the sounds
of my brain,
suffocating through the darkness,
and writhing in my head.
They told me
that life is just one day after another.
"Go home, kid.
Get away from me, you freak!
You don't belong!"
I can't breathe.
This hate fills up my lungs
that expand and deflate
...
just like yours do,
but only to accumulate in madness
that you provide on a platter.
I can't feel.
This lie I live by,
this sick pact with existence,
it numbed me like the cold.
They told me
that life is worth the struggle.
"Give up.
You're not worth anything.
You don't matter!"
I don't understand
why fate finds fun in hating me,
...
Just like you do.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Unique and original in concept, and a very powerful piece.
    I thought the last two lines were particularly powerful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Word flow

    Wow. a very deep and meaningfull poem that shows the truth of wat alot of ppl are going through but are scared to say something. 5/5 its great

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Wow this poem is deep and filled with emotion, I really hope your not going through this. once again great flow and excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I truly hope that this is not what you're going through! bout a year i did something it wasnt all that bad, but no one can seem to get over it! so, honestly, this poem gave me chickenpox!

    excellent work!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm. This is interesting.. I like it.
    I really think the first part was the best. I'm sorry, It's late and I'm not sure what else to say.
    A very nice write. Good job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

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