Jacket

by Vicious Tragedy â„¢   Jan 2, 2007


To each,
the jacket smells like the other.
But to others, it's just a jacket.

For her the jacket is her only way of remembering how he used to hold her tight in his arms.

And for him, it's his only way of being there for her.

Distance, now the only thing that separates them.

And love, love is all that keeps them together.

**I'll probably change this, it's just a rough draft. any suggestions/criticisms would be fine.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Godoftheblackflame

    I'm not a great poet but maybe add another thing that the jacket means to them, something to make it a little less straight to the point

    Eh I tried haha
    -daniel