This is breath taking poem so well written

Very different poem. Outstanding flow and rhyme! Um, at the end, did you mean they were going to heaven, or simply that they died? Just wondering!
Charisma*

Love this poem, beautiful and emtional! wow, well done!

Jeannie I tried, I really tried to choose a favorite part but I couldn't. The entire poem just takes your breath away.
Take care my dear friend

This is ANOTHER great poem! you are really talented. but i cant comment fully because i have to go. but this reall is a great poem it flowed well and whatever. but i really jsutloved the message and story.

x33Lauren