Nice wording....
Il like it

I've felt the uncertain feeling
Of myself falling into your eyes

okay so I'm all about the eyes, so that line is perfect to me. This seems like a piece of desperation.

Your memory is all my thoughts pursue

^ so true. Been there. Easy to understand and not necessarily a place I want to go back to mentally....at least not with some ppl. But all the same good wording and the honesty of your work is what makes it great.
*ME*