Comments : Divided

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This is good. I liked the way it flowed, even though it doesn't really rhyme. Great job though! 5/5 definitely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nevermore

    Really good i enjoyed it

  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    The denials I hear sound better than the truth
    But they wont stand on their own

    So those are my fav. lines of this poem. Man, there are so many times I wish a situation could work one way, but when you face reality, it just can't. This was really good.

    Is it enough to forget yourself
    And go in head over heels

    ^ I also wish those lines were true and ppl could really do that, but then we find ourselves doing things motivated by our emotional response and that's not necessarily the right choice, so I can relate to that too. LOL I pray these comments make sense to you. :)
    *ME*