Love's Only Everything {Triolet}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jan 2, 2007


Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss,
Forbidding love to reminisce,
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss.
Love's only everything, amiss
A templed body and fast kiss.
Sweet surrender - eternal bliss,
An endless touch and mending kiss.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I LOVE TRIOLETS!! and i LOVE this poem.. the flow is nice and i like how you rhymed ALL the lines .. its nice.. the word choice is spectacular.. spectacular write.. keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #2:
    You are so talented. This piece is just beautiful! You have such a way with words and are so good at expressing emotion and evoking it in others. Keep it up :)!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwwwwwwwh!
    I loved this one, it was so sweet.
    The wording was a joy to read and the flow and rhyme scheme were perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by Inner Critic

    Ohh, yeah. A big sigh poem , this one (melting into my chair). Uplifting and swoon-inducing.

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