This poem really intrigued me it made me want to wonder what it's all about. really well written with structure and ease of read! well done!

Very good!
5/5
xoxo-am

Poem kinda confused me a little. But I did like the parts I understood. I think I got confused in the 3rd stanza. But over all good write. Oh and when you submitted this poem the P&Q website sometimes messes it up and there are two places where it did that so you might want to edit this poem.

Rachel

Wow this poem was way good!!!! the flow and emotions were great. i can kinda relate to this...i just loved it. thanks again so much for reading that poem for me..i really appreciate it. take care:) 5/5

Ok now dont you see??? thats not fair cause we didnt get told the secret, however i think i know what happened but anyways great write 5/5

Ok i have no clue where to send you an email so i'll just say part of it here, my depression has gottin worse,i can't even tlak to my friends anymore i just can't find my words or reasons to talk with them and now there all getting mad and always asking why don't you talk with me anymroe,and i saying i can't explain it cuz i can't and they get more mad or frusterated,my moms all weird again with her bi-polar and my dads horrible with his anger my sis and bro won't stop either,i started cutting again,i'm a mess failing almost every class i have and exams are next week. . . i don't know where to go for help anymore,i don't know if i should start taking prozac i'm scared it's going to make me someone eles, i need help and i've asked for it but no one seems to know what kind of help to give

I loved this poem!!!!!!!!! i know what it feels like to tell one little lie, to hide one big secret!

Very nice
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