I cried!

by Avani   Jan 2, 2007


Its impossible to forget the love that we shared
And hard to get over the relationship that we had
Its very sad how you made a joke out of everything
All that was a lie, all the promises you made
And even everything that you said
Its hard to believe that you never cared
when you said you loved me to death
But again All that was a lie, all the promises you made
And even everything that you said
All my dreams are shattered
And all the promises that you made seems to fade
But again All that was a lie, all the promises you made
And even everything that you said
There is one thing i have realized
All you have done is lied
It was hard to trust you, but i tried
But in return you gave me tears and i cried!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this, I thought it was beautifully written.
    I liked the repetition you used, it drove your point across very well.
    Excellent work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Heba

    Very well written. i like it alot. it soo sad yet it shows us that we must not fear our fears. thx 4 the comment. peace out

  • 17 years ago

    by tomuchhurt

    I like it alot! very clever!!! amazing!!!!
    thanks for reading my poem!!
    Love: Angelito

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenny

    To have the courage to be so raw is awesome. Great poem~ makes me feel it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    Wow that is soo beautiful. I love it. I give you a 5 for just being really excellent!