I luv dis poem!its great!!

Wow that is soo beautiful. I love it. I give you a 5 for just being really excellent!

To have the courage to be so raw is awesome. Great poem~ makes me feel it!

I like it alot! very clever!!! amazing!!!!
thanks for reading my poem!!
Love: Angelito

Very well written. i like it alot. it soo sad yet it shows us that we must not fear our fears. thx 4 the comment. peace out

I really liked this, I thought it was beautifully written.
I liked the repetition you used, it drove your point across very well.
Excellent work.