That was disgusting. People shouldn't be able to write that good. Brilliant. Absolutely mind blowing. Inspiring and heartfelt, complex and yet understandable. Amazing write, keep up the good work.

That was disgusting. the end.

It was beautiful

Told you this would come to be something great. Second favorite. Beats Bath Water. But Bang Bang is still the best.

-speechless-

After reading this one I have added you to my favorite list as you are truly one of the top 10 poet here in this site.

Wow. To be so young, you write absolutely beautiful poems with such powerful emotion. Great job! 5/5

Fank god, neerly dun. lyk diz. rfachel barjnret said it all leuiek.

Oh w8 nam dun lolz! now reed em all agen to truely appresikate how great theya re/?!!

Okay Darling, you are amazing! This poem made me cry and I don't even know why..maybe out of jealousy hahaa. At first glance I was like, "wow, it's long =\ " But the title is what brought me in, and I was here to read it so I did. And usually, I can not stay focussed too long on a poem that's lengthy, but oh my stars in heaven, you kept me right to it with this one! You have talent! And I am adding you to my favorites. =)

5.5