Freedom?

by Kurt   Jan 2, 2007


You say we're free
In a land with no choice
You say we're free
Here you have no voice

You say we're free
From the sting of starvation
You say we're free
In a dying nation

You say we're safe
Each and every day
The government better realize
That their country isn't okay

As each day passes
Our strength ebbs away
We're running out of room
To keep the terror at bay

We need to have a plan
In this time of need
We need to rid the senate
Of avarice and greed

I would die to save this land
For my friends and country
But when asked the question
I answer "We Are Not Free"

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow..
    This was fantastic!
    I thought the rhyme scheme and flow worked very well and I enjoyed the imagery muchly.
    You did a wonderful job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very loud and strong your words are in this piece. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Your totally right! We are not free or safe in this world! Your poem has a great message! It's amazingly written as well...
    I really loved your poems that i read! Your so good at it.. Keep writing!
    Take care..
    love,,
    haya 3gab =]

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Thanks for the comment your very good!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great poem :) thanks for the comment

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