Comments : If They Would Understand

  • 17 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Very vert nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    Awesome poem,
    It has a smooth flow to it.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I don't want to face reality
    -- That's really how I'm feeling right now. I'd rather live in my little dream world and never wake up.

    ....Don't let things stop your from trying to live a life of your dreams
    -- Aww, that was a very inspirational ending. :]

    Great job, Melissa!

    Cayce.