Comments : Almost perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey
    wow your poem there was some of the thoughts i was havign few days ago.....
    my god.. its like coz scared u hold bk form him even tho there is no need to hold bk!

    it so made sense to me that poem..
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That so applies to me and my newest boyfriend. lets just say we both have a past and it's a very small world. lol. awesome poem. really felt wat was going on.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Ahh, hmm this is different and I like it for that. Not quite sure if there is a rhyming scheme here but that's good as sometimes forcing rhymes can make things well...not so good. But yep, like this :)
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Poems dont always have to RHYME wintersolstice..sheesh..the best ones dont..hehehe LOVE YOU CAPRI...i hope you and Chris really stay together...