by Sarah Jan 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Prisoner of time, the bonds that hold my weary heart |
by Boy
Ah it was so good. |
by me
Great poem it wuz a little bit short but o well i liked it a lot thought it wuz real good nd it wuz thoughfully written nd da flow was ok...5/5. |
I like it, your a better writer than me I think. Dwelling on the past, isn't a bad thing. When the past is full of love and commitment.. i love you Sarah :) |
I like all your poems.. my advice, Keep writing ;) |
by nicole
You both dwell on the past way to much!!!!! don't hate the time thats here and now, it won't help it go any quicker, simply become closer in relationship, and look to the future. |