I am sorry for your loss. It is hard to watch people we love suffer in pain. I can relate to that and I can also relate to having your dreams take you to another place and then you wake up and wish you were still in the happy dream land. The poem was great. 5/5

Dang.. are you saying you had a dream.. and it came true? ... dude! well did you tell anyone your dream? Because my friend says if you tell a dream it won't come true..

The only problem i found was:

Nothing! You did a great job on this... I'm sorry for your loss.

Excellent Poem

5/5

Omg i am so sorry i have that kinda stuff happen just never anyone real close but all the same it was really good.

Omg im really sorry...dont worry my grandpa died a little while ago too...they will go to heaven god willing...5/5 keep it up.

Very good poem, its som sad and deep and emotuional. but it was well written. very good my friend
xxxxxx

Awwww.... wow thats really sad, im so sorry about your grandpa, you wre obviously close.
On a happier note, this poem is truly amazing, so full of emotions and feelings that were verry clear! The metre is perfect it flowed beautifuly!
well done!
5/5 Steph

This is so sad. so so sorry for you. this is a great poem tho. great way to let it all out.

voted and gave you a 5. good on you. keep strong.

david