The Turning of the Wheel (Palindrome)

by x.Athame.x   Jan 2, 2007


Sunlight in trees
Fluffy and fat squirrels
Sky, pale but blue
Cool and clean air
Birds chirping merrily
Resonating peace
All is stable and still
Mistakes are gone
All is perfect
All is harmonious
All is renewed
The turning of the wheel
Trees in sunlight
Squirrels fat and fluffy
Blue but pale sky
Air, clean and cool
Merrily chirping birds
Peace resonating
Still and stable is all
Gone, are mistakes
Perfect is all
Harmonious is all
Renewed, is all

(C) Athame '07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Trees in sunlight"

    That was supposed to be the last line, lol. It's supposed to be completely mirrored so the second part would start with "Renewed, is all" then "Harmonious is all" and so on.
    But you got the words so perfect! Well done
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by xSpiritedShadowx

    Ah, this kind of poetry is so difficult to write. Great job. I adore the descriptions and imagery. :) *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww..what a cool little poem...i like how abstract it is

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