I did as you said and read it slow. It was very beautiful. I bet any woman would love to receive this. It's very pretty and paints calming pictures in your mind. Good job! And thank for all your comments on my poems! They are always appreciated.
Charisma*

How beautiful. Your description is amazing. This pulls the reader into it's depth. Excellent job!

Lovely poem...it reminds me of my lovely one...well done

It;s nice to read such a beautiful poem amidst so many sad ones on the site. You might title it "All that you are" Great job, any woman receiving this should melt into your arms. Very well penned!

Beautiful...awesome....romantic....
excellent!!!! Such a wonderful display of love and nature....

"You are the meadow of my thoughts, with flowers
reflecting your light into the day through tear
drops of the night that rest upon the peddles of
its tender flock."

This is my favorite verse of the whole...although it is all wonderful! 5/5

Beautiful...awesome....romantic....
excellent!!!! Such a wonderful display of love and nature....

"You are the meadow of my thoughts, with flowers
reflecting your light into the day through tear
drops of the night that rest upon the peddles of
its tender flock."

This is my favorite verse of the whole...although it is all wonderful! 5/5

"You are the meadow of my thoughts, with flowers
reflecting your light into the day"

I loved that line. I read this about three times Tom and each time, the pure brilliance shone brighter.
Any girl or woman would be delighted to recieve this, it's beautiful and the love just shines through.
I'm rambling now.
Excellent poem
5/5
*Gem*

Hey jus wanted to say thank yo ufor your comment... kinda understood wot u were talking about lol anyway just wanted to say thank you

This is a work of art, I love how you
penned the emotions of how love
does open us up to nature and just
how precious life is.

No doubt, you are very talented and I
understand the comment you left and
thank you for sharing,
Bogie

Its beautiful really stirs music in heart through beautiful soothing verses, amzaing lines loved them all.

Best wishes
chavii.

A beautiful poem indeed, your words flow so magically into each and every line conveying the inner most feelings of love. great piece! xox lithium

Wow
I must say it amazes me how some people can lay down their emotions so well
that is something I have to work on
this poem was lovely- though love poems arent really apealing to me, your kept my attention well!

thank you for your comment,

-shattered

This is a really in-depth poem, i loved it! Well done!

Such a beautiful, beautiful job!. Full of depth, passion and feeling, keep up the good work and continue with your beautiful work!
I hope to see more soon!
Thank you also for your kind comment on my own work
Ayesha
-5-

This is a truly beautiful poem. I was caught up in it from the beginning to the end. The flow was perfect and the imagery was amazing. I could actually feel the words wash over me like a melody. This is excellent. You created a lovely piece of poetry here. Great job! Keep writing like this and I will keep reading.

Letty

I felt my mind uncontrollably drifting along with the words. They were so beautiful that you cant help but get caught up in them. And then when I started getting towards the end of the poem I didnt want it to end. It was wonderful.

Cheers for the comment(:

Such beautiful words, I love these analogies. Lovelt poem. 5/5

This is an awesome poem... i love the description and how well it flowed. I felt like I was living in this poem. Excellent

I Love this, especially the ending.

This poem has something that distinguishes it from other love poems, beautiful piece ...i really like it 5/5