This poem paints a beautiful picture, one I really like. I really liked this stanza most of all:

the pain of the snow,
the pleasure of pain,

All together the poem had a very nice balance between flow and rhyme.

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

Wow good job! and thanks for the comment you left my on my haiku....i'm actually not sure if you're supposed to name them or not, cuz we just did a small unit on poems a couple years for school... well anyways, good job! this poem is very neat!

I well didn't realise you commented my poem. but thanks anyway. & i'm just amazingly lazy in the whole no capital thing going on but ta! :] x