Show me, take me, make me

by XfromwithinX   Jan 2, 2007


Show me rain and show me fame,
show me something to ease this pain.
Show me new things and show me old,
show me something that he cannot hold.
Take me to a river and take me to the sun,
Take me to a new love that has not yet been begun.
Take me to the moon and back, take me to mountains,
take me to the healing fountains.
Make me immortal and shielded by his being,
make me reveal my truthful seeing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I like how you set up your poem
    for the ending real nice

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I like how you set up your poem
    for the ending real nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    This One of other best poems, may i just say one thing...i see its rytmic poem, but some words cut the rythm off. anywho i still like the poem, and i like the fact that you write your poems from your mind, feeling and heart, in another words it comes naturaly...lol

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