Not bad, the poem was heartfelt and emotional. Hang in there and let it all out through the pen/pencil, keyboard. Keep up the good work.

Thank you!

If there is one thing that i have learned in life so far it is that you cant wait for anyone to save you, you'll just keep falling
i know it sucks when you dont have someone to lean on, but cant just pray for someone to enter your world and fix everything. if things are bad ask for help
now comments for the poem:
i think this is one the best ones that you have posted so far

Thanks ....... but someone is trying to catch me .......but... i just cant find in in my heart to trust them so i dont get hurt.