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by Purple Jan 2, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Consumed with anger The fire burns Spreading more ashes The fire yearns Wanting others To feel the same Its will to burn Is impossible to tame The burnt remains Effected by each tiny breeze The remains break and part With unforgiving ease Spread amongst the world Memories of the flame A spark still burns inside A reminder of the pain Gone inside the fire More than objects were lost Happiness, hope, and attachment A survivor saddening cost
by master of shadow
Powerful and well written. the lines: "Its will to burn Is impossible to tame" tripped me up a bit... but that may just be my reading rather than anything actually being wrong with that area of the peice.