Comments : R.I.P.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Good job.. i can tell its from the heart =]

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow.
    Short
    but heartfelt
    and passionate
    Great job
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by Shortii3

    Wow, i can tell you expressed that from your heart. good job! 5/5
    check out some of my poems and tell me what you think :)
    ShOrTiE

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    It takes a true poet, with true courage to overcome the pain of losing someone and be able to express your feelings and thoughts into words. Bravo.

    All the Best.