by Tripp Jan 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The feeling inside my heart is bursting out |
Absolutly wonderful...this one caused me to loose my breath. 5/5 |
by Rachel RTVW
Beautifully penned and heartfelt dedication to your love. I bet she was impressed. Girls love the sentimental stuff. Awesome job! |
Well it seems to me young man that your in love. I remember the first girl I ever fell in love with and we actually lasted a long time about 5 years. We broke up a little while ago. Love is very special but it never seems to last like we plan, be careful with oyur heart my friend, amazing poem tho 5/5 fer sure great flow |
by Gasttlee
Thanks for the comment and I hope we stay in touch. Brillant poem by the way. It's lovely. |
by Amy
Awww... i loved it, u should let her read it. |