by Lyndsay Kalyta Jan 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I walked by that old oak tree |
by Barry
MMMmmmmmm.... |
by Robyn
This was an awsome poem i can so relate i love ur work keep it up u r so much good at this!! |
Amazing...my emotions rode the same ride yours did as i read this poem! when you were talking in the beginning about the forever in the tree it made me smile to think of the feelings that accompany those kind of things and then as you stated how you shed your smile i began to wonder and slowly my smile fell from my face too. You are a wonderful writer and this piece showed it! wonderful write and it kept my interest all the way through! i have loved reading your work today! Great Job! |
Wow..that is incrediable.i can completly relate and hav been through a very similar experience! u have used such strong words that are just so realistic, true and compelling!!have a great 2007..and just no that u are not alone!!!i no its hard to let them go even afta they have treated u like an object..and abused our rights are a women to achieve those sexual stisfations!stay safe luv kate |