by Danni Jan 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He thinks that she's always gonna cheat, |
by Emma
Awww this is saddd :(...but its really gooddd:) nice job |
by celi
Hey danny! that's a really nice poem! sad, of course, but i really liked it! i especially liked the end (where u reveal you're talking about yourself), it's really a surprise to the reader! :p anyway 5/5 from me! and by the way, thanks for commenting on my poem! celi **** |