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by Veronica Jan 3, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
This is my confession of how i learned my lesson about what love takes and how you were a mistake I gave you my heart too fast so you knew it wouldn't last but it's not my fault your heart's locked in a vault so hide your self from the world somehow your words were curled lies were all I seemed to hear when you whispered in my ear lies telling of devotion and love saying I was sent from above I lapped it up, and soaked it in but there was no way i could win So end my little tale of the heartbreak known as male how they rip your heart apart so it's better not to start In a game we call love its the destination we dream of sometimes you get knocked down but your feet will find ground
by Brittany
I like this one :)
by pozinthenoise
Fairly nice! Love the flow. You made a good poem out of this.
by huaiiren
I am huaiiren i also got wirte poem but urs is good.. i like it... i am the same road like u too... good one