This is really nice. It definitely feeels like a song! 5/5

Omg this poem is awesome! thank you soo much for entering it in my contest! i loved reading it because it was so different to the usual poems i read around here, it actually feels like a song. But i just loved your whole idea and how you used it, you have definitely got some talent :) 5/5

Good job on this one, although you could have left out a few explanation points, although i understand why they are there.
5/5
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~Stephen White