I thought this poem was excellent! It is so true. And it is good that you see that. By your writting I kinda of since you have a very good personallitly about things. Very Nice. :]

Rachel

Thank u its great to see ppl who agree with me if more ppl started to see it this way i think things whould change u kno? well thanks for commenting

with love

I liek this it is veryy true.. I can tell the angry put in to it.

They can NOT fix your endurance,
willpower,
or BRAINS...

i love it....great topic to write on. except there is one spelling error..."fallow"...it should be "follow"

superb job

xoxo