Very nice. I loved it. I can relate on this, and I am sure a lot of others can as well. Great Job! Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I agree with Kris. Except for the "flaws perfectly" lmao. Anywhos, darl, this was beautiful. I swear it could almost make me cry. I can relate to this so much. I love your poems!! Amazing write!! Never stop! And I'm GLADDDD you're back!!! Love ya

-` Liz

Excellent job on this. I really enjoyed reading it. It says alot about the attrction we rarely feel for someone else. Love at first sight. Good write.

This was beautiful.
Really sweet.
I thought it flowed very well, and I was pulled into the poem within the first few lines.
Excellent.

This is such a beautifully written love poem. And those are very hard to write. I can definitely tell that you love and care about this guy.. You did a really good job on expressing your feelings in this and making the reader feel the love that you feel. Amazing write. 5/5

Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!!

_Mya_

This is amazing
5/5, your a great writer :) well done
xxx

This is exactly how i felt when before i dated my ex gf

Wow, i really like this poem, good job. ;)

Dude your writing is sooo passionate & true! i just LOVE your style!!!

I read this twice....i just don't do that
mmm....6/5 thats hot.

Barry

The last stanza doesnt really fit into the poem...but other than that its really good

I LOVE THIS... im so in the same kinda relationship...we have been together for 3 amazing months and i got a promise ring for our 3month anniversary so yes i know how all that feels!...Gurl keep writing *hugs* Lynzie Kae

Wow...

This is an amazing poem.

This was absolutley amazing.
keep up the great work.
your poetry is beautiful.
:))))

Girl that shiiit is hot im really feelin that i had to give yo a 5

Its like u jus penned down my thoughts for sum1...gud 1..cheers

OMG! That is really good! It made me cry! That poems says exactly what I feel!

That is so good! Very well written it made me cry!