by Jenni Jan 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
My entire body aches in pain |
This is a very good poem. It shows a lot of feeling in it. I really loved the feeling coming out of this. There's absolutely nothing wrong with it. Although, maybe you should put this in the SAD section instead of the LOVE section. Other than that, everything else is fine with it. Great job!! 5/5 |
by Annabel
Aww how ace! I loved it .. perfecto!~ xxxx so many wonderful emotiones came across.. xxx |
by amoxi
This poem was great it had amzing flow and it was beautifully written i loved it, it showed so much emotion and was true about what its like after you no longer have the one you love,it was great 5/5 |
by RJ
Beautiful Poem... Well put together... |
by Robie Lincer
Very heart felt poem! |