Ooh! i relly like this poem!! there's so much emotion, and for the most part, it flows really well! good job!

Forever*Yours

This has a great flow and word use. keep going!

5/5 david

Aww... this is the cutest poem EVER!... the emotion is great and the flow is perfect.. the rhymes are good.. a couple seemed a little forced.. i really like how you repeated the same stanza but slightly different.. and the ending was perfect.. a very heartfelt poem

Very heart felt poem!
it had alot of hidden meanings in the poem! loved it... keep it up!

Beautiful Poem... Well put together...
RJ

This poem was great it had amzing flow and it was beautifully written i loved it, it showed so much emotion and was true about what its like after you no longer have the one you love,it was great 5/5

Aww how ace! I loved it .. perfecto!~ xxxx so many wonderful emotiones came across.. xxx

This is a very good poem. It shows a lot of feeling in it. I really loved the feeling coming out of this. There's absolutely nothing wrong with it. Although, maybe you should put this in the SAD section instead of the LOVE section. Other than that, everything else is fine with it. Great job!! 5/5

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