Comments : When Love Isn't Real

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely! I loved it! Great job!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "What was lost she can't get back
    But parts of her are still in tact
    Those pieces she'll take with her now
    Start again. She must, somehow."

    Wonderful flow and concept. Especially loved the above stanza. It spoke of a hope of survival Beautifully done.

    Jeannie