Lay down

by StormyStar   Jan 3, 2007


How can you stand there and say that you care?
how will you look at me with anger and dispare?

you told me always and forever
you said that is what we were.
but you moved on now your hers.

she told you what i said, you asked what the difference was, i mean what i told you with all my heart and i will forever more.
you were apart of my life for some time now

you can't tell me why you left me me here
all i know is that you're there.

the way you held me ment the world
i can't take this anymore, seeing you with her hurts me inside.
i miss the way we always talked, hours at a time, but now i just wanna lay down and die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    As far as structure meaning and flow this was your best. The spelling was increasingly better too. I wonder though if you could do other subjects rather then love have you even broaden your mind to other possibilities? Plot121