Faded Heart, Faded Soul

by Twisted Heart   Jan 3, 2007


Was the lingering reflection
Just a passing of the love
Within this shattered dwelling
Is a wound worth speaking of.

A homage for the refuge
Where once a faith had lived
Now holds the broken pieces
Of a heart that can't forgive.

A soul that lost its beauty
By a lie told long ago
Now stands inside the emptiness
Unable to let go.

For just as surely as the heart
Reminds the soul to weep
It'll bring the hope of loving
In the dreams that follow sleep.

But holding to the memories
That tore a life in two
Will be the final judgement
When the pain has carried through.

Among the shards of hopelessness
Is the heart and soul's last breath
Distinguished by the hardened mind
With hands that offer death

Still, we sit inside ourselves
With thoughts we cannot hide
The inkling of a memory
That's formed from faded lies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    I really loved this poem as well. but i sort of feel now that you use the abcb rhyme scheme alot. and i want to see what else you can do! lol. but this really is a great poem. the emotions displayed are done so very well and the flow was aslo great.

    xx3Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This speaks right to me....very sad and poignant piece. Beautifully written....flawless.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Beautiful poem. so hard to be in contests with you because you always do so good! I entered this one too if you can't tell, but not sure if it compares to yours. Good job though...always a challenge!
    Charisma*